This is looking good. Plausible history, nice conflict, appropriate thought given to infrastructure and the needs of the community. Just narrow down the location in relation to other communities, landmarks, or ruins as appropriate so readers know where this place is.--OvaltinePatrol (talk) 05:13, July 25, 2013 (UTC)
Thank you, and I can do that, it's on the Rio Grande so literally a stone's throw from Mexico and is approximately 175 miles south of Corpus Christi, TX if that helps any. I'll try to find a spot to add that in. Florida Born 77 (talk) 05:25, July 25, 2013 (UTC)
Amazing page, I was only wondering... how was Hidalgo affected by the invasion of Mexico in the 50's? I think you could have a lot of fun playing with the two decades leading up the Great War. Musiekutsueki (talk) 20:05, February 1, 2014 (UTC)